单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
There are a lot of tourists, they feed the monkey, playing with tiger. Animal and people are very friendly, we should treat the animal. It is important to protect the environment, do not throw garbage anywhere in the zoo. Because of the protection of animals is to protect ourselves.ha ha