单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
There are a lot of tourists, they feed the monkey, playing with tiger. Animal and people are very friendly, we should treat the animal. It is important to protect the environment, do not throw garbage anywhere in the zoo. Know the importance of wild animal protection. Because of the protection of animals is to protect ourselves.