2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

On Excessive Packaging It is universally acknowledged that plenty of sellers package their product excessively.Useless and harmful,excessive packaging plays a terrible role in protecting our society. The phnomenon,in a large sence,give rise of competition in business.For one thing,customers almost are involved in buying goods with a beautiful and fashionable looking,causing school of sellers,decide to package their product excessively.For another,in the modernized society, it is fablous and unique goods that can be sold for a high price. As far as I am concerned,excessive packaging is a sence of waste.There is no doubt that customers ought to be sensible when shopping .With the same time,much more attention should be paied by productors to the quality of product.What's more,our government are supposed to take measures to push ahead with an envirnmental protecting and sustainable society.