2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；连词使用偏少。

On Excessive Packaging It is universally acknowledged that plenty of sellers package their product excessively.Useless and harmful,excessive packaging plays a terrible role in protecting our society. The phenomenon,in a large sense,give rise of the competition in business.For one thing,customers are almost involved in buying goods with a beautiful and fashionable looking,causing a large quanlity of sellers,decide to package their product excessively.For another,in the modernized society, it is fabulous and unique goods that can be sold for a high price. As far as I am concerned,excessive packaging is a sense of waste.There is no doubt that customers ought to be sensible .With the same time,much more attention should be paid by prodictors to the quality of product.What's more,our government is supposed to take measures to push ahead with an environmental and sustainable society.