句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文章词汇不够丰富,但单词拼写要认真检查。
Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our city. I'd like to tell you something about our city. Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was once the capitals of ten dynasties.Nanjing is very nice.There are many place of intrests in nanjing,such as:xuanwu lake,stone city…………There are also many tall buildings. It is a good place to visit if you want to travel. Thank you.
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