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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
With the development of science and technology, the Internet is closely connected with our life. To some extend changed our way of life. For instance, shopping is not just in the street and in the shopping mall, we also can shop on the internet, and has become a fashion. After all, shopping online is a virtual trading platform, so it has both good points and shortcomings. First, shopping online can save our time and energy. Secondly, the net commodities price tend to cheaper than shopping mall. Last, network store has a wide variety of commodities, so it can meet our basic needs. But on the other hand, shopping online also has drawbacks, the most prominent is two points. The first, we can get the commodities information through the pictures and words, in this case, we can't identify it's quality in person, The second, pay online has certain risk, may cause the loss of property. In my view, shopping online really bring us a large amount of convenience, but we should also choice prudently, buy only what we really need. Do not spend all the money in saving money, it's unwise. If we can make full use of advanced scientific and technological achievements, then our life will become more colorful.
