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文中词汇表达灵活多样，可是学术词汇使用较少；若注意一些句子错误，文章会更漂亮；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
As we all know, human's life is short. If you waste time all day, you will get nothing but regret in the end of your life. So it's important to make full use of our life. But the question is, how should we make good use of our finite time? It seems to be a difficult question, but in fact, we all know how to do. Everyone has his desire and knows that he should try to achieve his goal, then life can be meaningful as well as exciting. A goal is like a star at dark night that guides you to go ahead in your life. For example, many great men had their dreams deep in mind in their childhood, and later they worked very hard to achieve it. Finally, their efforts paid off. Not only did they realize their dreams, but also they life became more beautiful owing to they hard-working and great achievements. Beside, to make best use of life is not to live longer but make life more worthwhile. As the old Chinese saying goes, "People all have to die, but some's life is greater than Tai mountain, while others's life are lighter than feather." So it is wise to do things that are valueable to outlast your life. In my opinion, we should enjoy our life as well as chrish it and make it wonderful. For myself, I have my dream, and I will try my best to achieve it. Of course, I hope my effort can bring people as well as me happy, hopeful and wonderful life.
可可英语 - 划词释义
