2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Now a day,online shopping is more and more propular.It is one fasion in our live. First,online shopping is very convenience,only in house can go shopping,it is also setting in house.Not be in street,outside shopping was very tried. Second,online shopping is more cheaper,people always want to use less money than buy more things. Third,online shopping have many part,for expleam,costs,books,shoots and to many things.So to many choose. So,we all love online shopping,but online shooping also to many problem.Such as,the quantise are not good,it not good for our take back the goods.And also becaous cheaper,the money use faster. We should use corrt way to online shopping.Not always in online shopping.