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Saving money in daily life Nowadays , there is a hot issue that saving money in each person's daily life . some people thinl it is of no necessary to do because this may not smart consuption people which makes your niggard in other people . But from my perspective this is faesible in daily life. First , Saving money in daily life is benefits foe people . When the economic crisis around the world , earing money becomes harder than ever before . A good habit of saving money in daily life will help you overcome this difficult period or other economic situation in your life . What's more , saving money in daily life is a good way to practice you how to arrange your money . In modern commercialized society , parents teach their child to do when they are little chils . For example , parents given them some change let them do to supermarket buy something. It is ture that saving money in daily life have some defect . But as a matter of fact , this behavior teaching peolpe to make the best use of their money.
