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My Friend Every one has his or her friends . So do I .Now I want to introduce one of my friends to you. He comes from a wonderful country, France. He is a quite clever boy . His hair is brown . And he has a big nose and big eyes. He is much taller than me. But he is really thin. What about your friends?