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Saving money in daily life Nowadays, there is a hot issue that saving money in each person's daily life. Some people thinl it is of no necessary to do because this may not make people smart consuption which let you seems niggard in other people. But from my perspective this is faesible in daily life. First, Saving money in daily life is in favor of people. When the economic crisis around the world, earing money becomes harder than ever before. A good habit of saving money in daily life will help you overcome this difficult period or other economic situation in your life. What's more, saving money in daily life is a good way to practice you how to arrange your money. In modern commercialized society, parents teach their child to do when they are little youngset. For example , parents given them some change let them do to supermarket buy something. It is true that saving cash in daily life have some defect. But as a matter of fact, this behavior teaching peolpe to make the best use of their money.