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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；建议适当增加些复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Saving money in daily life Nowadays, there is a hot issue that saving money in each person's daily life. Some people think that is no necessary to do because this may not make people spend your cash intelligently which let you seem niggard in other people. But from my perspective this is feasible in daily life. First, Saving money in daily life is in favor of people. When the economic crisis around the world, earing money becomes harder than ever before. A good habit of saving money in daily life will help you pull through this difficult period or other financial situation in your life. What's more, saving money in daily life is a good way to practice you how to arrange your money. In modern commercialized society, parents teach their child to do when they are little youngest. For example, parents given them some change let them do to the supermarket buy something. It is true that saving coin in daily life have some defect. But as a matter of fact, this manner is carry through will bring you some surprise. The old word says to save is to get.
