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it is unwise that when you see something or heart it then get a conclusion immediatly.it is a bad habit,o nce you accostumed to it ,you can't chang it any more .you may get many misunderstanding with your friends. as we know ,we cannot think of it seriously in a short time .if we make a important decision ,we should think it over and over ,and need to discuss with others.
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