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AS the saying goes,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.Nowadays,more and more people regard education as a very inportant way for their children to success.So they try their best to make their sons or daughters to be educated well. The preasure of students are becoming larger.They don't want to make someone who are expecting their can have good marks in each exam .