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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(10):中国旅行

发布时间:2013-07-12 16:43浏览次数:340
要求:

假定你是李华,你的朋友Peter将来中国旅行。请写信邀请他来你家乡游玩


应包含以下内容:  

1.交通: 飞机或火车,机场有45路公交车,在最后一站下车,如坐火车你将去车站接;  

2.活动内容: 到附近的岛上玩,游泳、跑步、爬山、吃海鲜。  


注意:

1. 开头和结尾已为你写好(不记入总词数 );     

2. 词数100左右。 

 

Dear Peter,  
I'm really excited to know that you’ll come to China for summer holidays. I hope you will come to visit my hometown. _________________              
Let me know your travel plan when you have one. I’m looking forward to seeing you again, in my hometown.  
Cheers,  
Li Hua  
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评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Dear Peter, I’m really excited to know that you’ll come to China for summer holidays. I hope you’ll come to visit my hometown. You can either fly or take a train to come here when you’re in the country. Both the airport and train station are not far from my home. From the airport you can take Bus No. 45. Please get off at the last stop. If you come by train, I’ll meet you at the train station. During your stay, we can visit the islands nearby. They are very beautiful in summer. We can go swimming in the sea, running along the seaside and climbing the hills there. The seafood is wonderful on the islands. I’m sure you’ll like it. Let me know your travel plan when you have one. I’m looking forward to seeing you again, in my hometown. Yours Li Hua

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