2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

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It is a common phenomoenon that many people like to celebrate western festivals.Due to the world becoming globalizied,the western festivals is popular in China.Not only the western festivals interesting and fresh for chinese,but also joy it can bring to people. The popular of western festivals have many influence in China.The western festival can boost the cost of people in shopping.Therefore,many businessmen make use of the celebration of western festivals to make money.Besides,as the western festivals becoming popular,the position of chinese festivals is dropped down. As far I am concerned,people should pay more attention to the chinese festivals.Althrough the western festivals are interesting and fresh,the chinese festivals are passed from our history.They represent the traditional culture of China.Therefore,the position of the chinese traditional festivals can't be changed