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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文中能较准确地使用学术词汇，但词汇表达仍贫乏。
Nowaday, more and more people keen on shopping online, as such shopping method not only has competitive price, but also has convience model, you could buy anything you want in any time or any place as long as you have internet. Although it's fashion and easy way, it still has some shortage, firstly , you couldn't compare product quality intuitively, just refer to detailed information or pictures which is provided by seller; sencondly, if you only plan to buy one thing, you still will buy more just for lower price, finally, you find it's not your needful, but you already wasted money; thirdly, you are not satisfied with procudt you bought, sometimes it's hard for your to exchange or return it even you have reasonable justification. In my opinion, online shopping should come on more laws and regulation to protect consumer's benefit. As a consumer, you also should have rational mind on online shopping.
