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It is a smart consumers to careful with our money? In daily life, we like buy the things on sale, because we can take the same quarity with a cheaper price. As a middel or low class family, it is necessary to take this strategy. And I support this view, as it won't spent extal money, therefore, we can save money and buy more things what we want. Why I support this way? As a student, most of us aren't rich, we just a consumer. Moreover, I believe most of us will chose cheaper products with the same quality goods. And nowadays, we can gain high or low prices of each product from news, network and brochure. In these convenient ways, why we not chose a better and cheaper one. Buying cupones as a fashion consumption now. In a word, careful with money on spending is not a improper and shameful things to everyone, on the contrary, it is a slpendid character. We should be a smart consumers on price.
