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as a native of guangxi province,i have always been proud of my hometown ,there are numerous places of nature beauty,amony the attractive places,guilin is the frist place where i want to show my foreign friend around. the reason why i choose guilin as the first choice to take her to see is that guilin is a well-known tourist spot,it has been known by people of all around the world because its extremely beautiful,and there is also filled with historical interests ,it is a typical place of natural sights of guangxi province,all the time,guilin is the first place where foreigners wants to visit when they comes to guangxi. as a perfect combination of natural scenery and social traditional culture,guilin is attractive for many people.i believe my foreign friend will fall in love with the beautiful landscape,jist as i did.
