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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33611
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

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用户练习作文:

It is a smart consumers to careful with our money? In daily life, we like to buy the things on sale, because we can take the same quality with a cheaper price. As a middel or low class family, it is necessary to take this strategy. And I support this view, as it won't spent extal money, therefore, we can save money and buy more things that we want. Why I support this way? As a student, most of us aren't rich, we just a consumer. Moreover, I believe most of us will choose cheaper products with the same quality goods. And nowadays, we can gain high or low prices of each product from news, network and brochure. Has these convenient ways, why we not chose a better and cheaper one?Buying cupones as a fashion consumption now. In a word, careful with money on spending is not a improper and shameful things to everyone, on the contrary, it is a splendid character. We should be a smart consumers on price.

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