使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;过程性词汇偏少;学术词汇稍微偏少,单词拼写方面也要继续努��。
As with the old saying goes, "Every road leads to Romma."In china of our own time,much of concern should not only on our profession but also on the humantity study,because we have a wild range of choices to live a beautiful life.So we should concentrate on my comprehensive abilities as modern youth and future builder of China. Comprehensive ability is consisted of vast different ways such as professional knowledage,humantity study, the ability of dealing with problems of society and etc. For example,learning philosophy during his teenagers is the curious experience of Einstain causing he regard physical problems in a philosophier's perspective.Formos plays the violin when he think about a complex case.Prisedent Mao swimmed across Chang River in winter to strenthen his mind and body. So only when we put our efforts into various fields what we may need ,can we have a bright furture .