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A Beautiful City In China My hometown is located in the center of China,whose name is Henan .People here are happy and optimistic. If you want to know more about Henan ,it is a good choice to have a visit of it.Now,let me introduce something to you. It is necessary for you to have a look at KaiFeng which is the Old City of ancient China. It is also the symbol of China's ancient culture.Another good choice is LuoYang.Here ,you can appreciate flowers. In the meantime,you can also content your appetite.In other word,there are many delicious foods.For instance,huimian,hulatang,jiaozi and so on. People here welcome your coming.I bet you must have an unforgotten trip.
