2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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During this picture,wo can see that different degrees has different unemployment rates and different weekly earnings.Therefore,Education pays a important role in our life. as wo can see,doctoral degree has a 2.5 percent of unemployment rate,Its unemployment rate is lowest, but,One degree of less than high school diploma has the highest unemployment rate.