2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；作者能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但拼写方面要再接再厉；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

As with the old saying goes, "Every road leads to Romma."In the era of us,much of concern should not only on our profession but also on the humanity study,because we have a wild range of choices to live a fine life.So we should concentrate on my comprehensive abilitity as modern youth and pillars just of China. Comprehensive ability is consisted of vast different ways such as professional knowledage,humanity study, the ability of dealing with problems of society and etc. For example,learning philosophy during his teenagers is the critical experience of Einstain causing he to regard physical problems in a philosophier's perspective.Sherlock Holmes plays the violin when he think about a comlicated case.Chariman Mao swum across Yangtze River in winter to strengthen his mind and body. So only when we put our efforts into all kinds of aspects what we may need ,can we have a brilliant tomorrow .