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hello everyone,now,let me introduce myself for you.i am a person who is easily affected by enviornment, as for me, water is close to my character. different enviorments shape different forms of water,there are 2 forms of water:lakes and rivers. because of lacking of spirit to run a risk, lakes just only stay at original place but not opening another unknown fields. finally, it is limited by shores. the storage of lakes had before reduced. the future of lakes, i think, is dried-up to death. on the contray, the other are rivers. river is the thing i adored. at the begining, in fact, river is small and weak, but it always go forward with endless accumulation, strengthen itself day by day. finally, pour into ocean, realize their goal. rivers are positive and independent. once they determined their goals, they will insist on and reach it with hard working and unchangable attitude. as i mentioned above, because influenced easily, my character is close to water. in my lifetime,there are so many important, most of which are shiped by another people, including my friends, teaxchers and parents. now, i want to be riverlike people but not lakelike people. i think with the choose, my future will be better.
