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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Hello everyone,now,let me introduce myself to you.I am a person who is easily affected by environments, as for me, water is close to my character. Different environments shape different forms of water,there are 2 forms of water:lakes and rivers. because of lacking of spirit to run a risk, lakes just stay at original place but not opening another unknown places. Finally, limited by shores,the storage of lakes had before reduced. The future of lakes, I think, is dried-up to death. On the contrary, the other is river.A river is the thing I adored. At the beginning, in fact,a river is small and weak, but always go forward with endless accumulation, strengthen itself day by day. Finally, pour into the sea, realize their goal. Rivers are positive and independent. once they determined their goals, they will insist on and reach it with hard working and the same attitude. As I mentioned above, because influenced easily, my character is close to water. In my lifetime,there are so many important, most of which are shaped by another people, including my friends, teaxchers and parents. Now, I want to be river like people but not lake like people. I think, with the choice, my future will be better.
