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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22894
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

I will graduate next year, now I start to worry about my future, I don’t know what kind of job I should work on, I see the job hunting information from the Internet, I don’t know whether I should take the chance. My teacher told me that I need to take every chance, so that I will find what I want. Graduate season is a sad and busy season. After four years’ study, it is time to say goodbye to your classmates, the building of the deep relationship makes it hard to say goodbye. At the same time, finding a job is the most important thing for students, because they need to find their places in the society. As there are many opportunities for graduate students, they don’t always know what to do. I have learned that I should take every chance when they job offer comes, even though I need to go to a far place to get the interview and there will be some money that I need to spend. But I will learn many things and become more competitive. When the opportunity comes, I will take no hesitation to seize it.

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