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Nowadays,many of us,especially as students,are cautious with our money:we often collect all sorts of coupons;we don't buy clothes unless in a sale.Some people think that all this may not make us savvy consumers.Speaking for myself,I'm not in good graces with their view. There are two reasons to support my view.For one thing,we are students at present.We don't have sufficient money to buy too much expensive clothes,cosmetic. All of our money come from our parents.Granting that you wear expensive clothes,can prove you are a wealthy?The answer is transparent.For another,saving is a good virtue of our country.As a modern student,we take the responsibility for spreading our traditional virtue.Thus,being a frugal man is the best way to inherit this virtue. All in all,collecting all types of coupons and buying bargains is neither the symbol of the poor,nor shameful things,which is one of the methods of spreading our traditional virtue.Meanwhile,It can make savvy men out of extravagant men.