2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

To some children,everything is ok.Because their parents has done well everything.Their parents give them the best lives,so children don't worry about their future. But, are you think about it? It is good at children? In my opinion,parents'action doesn't help their children.Today everyone need indenpent,the society need people can do things by themself.Furthermore,as time goes by,people can'thelp their children all time,their will died some day in the future.so we must help children independent. What can we do for children,help them indepenent?First,give them some tasks when their are young,such as washing closhes,cleaning their room by themselef.When they are older,can ask them to buy something in the supmarket. In this way,it can help children independent.