新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

希望作者学术词汇的使用能更熟练，另外要认真检查拼写；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As the society develops, at present, we have to bear more and more burdens to study and work. However, what we have ingored might be crutial:games. Equally for children and adults, in my perspectives, games can do goods to us. Even though adults are mature, they can also spent their time in games to make themselves happy and accompany their children. We probably have a prejudice that aldust should be too serious to play games. Nevertheless, what if they are sad. Is it reasonable for them to play games to release pressure? Playing games stands for a inherent hobby whthin our heart. Far from being naive, it brings us back to our ture loves. No matter which kind of game you play, it is just for fun. Take my uncle as an illustration, he is addicted to working at daytimes. But he might also go outside to play video games with me when it comes to weekends. He would never feel embarrased for that. Shouldn't he, right? Because pursuing happiness is a right of every human being. And what should be explained is that he can devote himself from head to toe into the next week's works. Games do exert a positive influence on him! Furthermore, there is no better way to accompany our children than playing games with them. Everytime, I will be touched deeply, when I see scences in movie where parents play games with their little children. It's so soft that I cannot forget them so far. Admittedly, sometimes, we are busy and have no opportunity to be with our famalies. But at least, we could not give the chance to play games with them. If you want to be a serious father and never be going to play games with them, how painful and selfish you are. Taking my father's love as an example, I would never forget every moment of my childhood, when I and my father play basketball and computer games together. Meanwhile during these process, my father also taught me a lot of knowledges about how to be alert and how to sove problems. I think it's very useful and warming. In an conclusion, as above, Playing games is benificious to aldults no matter for themself or their famalies. At last, although sometimes they are too busy to have even a chance to go back to their childhood, don't you think it just like a dream whthin every one of us to have fun.