2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

To some children,everything is ok.Because their parents has done well everything.Their parents give them the best lives,so children don't worry about their future. But, are you think about it? It is beneficial to children? In my opinion,parents'action doesn't help their children.Today, everyone needs independence,the society needs people can do things by themselves.Furthermore,as time goes by,people can'thelp their children all the time,their will died some day in the future.so we must help children independent. What can we do for children,help them indepnedent?First,give them some tasks when they are young,such as washing their cloches and cleaning their room.When they are older,can ask them to buy something in the supermarket. In this way,it can help children independent.