高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

I like to see the movie is very.muchbecause movie can catch my eyes so easily, I will be immerged into the story soon, unlike the books, which abound in words, make me get bored easily. One of the movie’s functions is to catch people’s attention fast, as the movie is interesting and people can see what is going on clearly. Most important function of movie is to show people the culture. We can see all kinds of the countries’ culture from the movies, a good movie reflects the director’s opinion about the world or the value. Like the American movie, individual heroism is everywhere, in reality, American people indeed praise individual heroism, they chase for individuality. In the Indian movie, we can see there are a lot of poor people and the women’s situation is not that good. Movie is a good way for people to learn things。