高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

It is known to all that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. In order to make it successful event, we will improve the environment of Beijing and build more venues。 As the same time,it is necessary for us to improve the quality and culture of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. I notice that sometimes some young people don’t behave properly in our daily lives. For example,spitting in public places can be seen somewhere. The lawns are crossed in the park although it is not right to do so.The flowers in the public garden are picked. What is worse , rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street. In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China. So every one of us should form good habits from now on.