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China is now more and more involved in international events, so it is necessary for us to improve the qualities of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. It is known to all that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. In order to make it successful event, we will improve the environment of Beijing and build more venues。 As the same time,it is necessary for us to improve the quality and culture of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. I notice that sometimes some young people don’t behave properly in our daily lives. For example,spitting in public places can be seen somewhere. The lawns are crossed in the park although it is not right to do so.The flowers in the public garden are picked. What is worse,rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street. In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China. So every one of us should form the good habits from now on.