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文中词汇使用灵活，学术词汇积累做的很棒，但拼写错误要注意；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
With the development of technology and the improvement of people's life standard, computer has been into home, namely, we have entered the information age. As we see, the internet has brought much convenience to our life in all aspects, especially in education.Since the internet comes into our life, it becomes possible to learn without consideration of time and place.And also having no access to books or resources will never be a good excuse to fail in studying. As far as I am concered, if we can harness it in a right way, it can benefit us o lot in education. To start with,from the point of view of the students, the internet can provide them various useful information, thus broadening our horizion and enabling us to keep pace with the society changes. Because, in China, it is a fact that young students are inclined to be in a limited circle with their minds obessed with the textbooks and their homework.On the other hand, for students who are shy,the internet serves as a platform for self-expression. Though they are introverted in class, they actually very positive o study discussion online. And they are pleased to update their status on the internet, which is a better way for parents or teachers to understand them. After all, education is a matter of body and mind.Only schools know the students well, can they adopt right measures in response to specific students. For the teachers, they have access to rich teaching materials, which can make sure that they can present vivid and qualified class to the students. In the long run, it can better the overall teaching performances dramtically. Moreover, the popularity of the internet also makes multimedia teaching available to the teachers and students. In this manner, students attention can be greatly absorbed. It follows that the teaching process can surely proceed smoothly and certainly the reult is always satisfying. Finally, seeing from the society, the internet makes people's relationship closer and people can communicate with famous persons they admire and as well they can exchange opinions with persons having the same interests. However, while enjoying the benefits that the internet provides, we have to face the fact that we are bombarded by the diversified statistics, new things and news clips. I believe gradually people will enhance the ability of distinguishing between the right and wrong, true and false. And a picture of learning society is before our eyes. As the general trend indicates, the internet has been an inescapable part of our life and will play a more and more important role in the furture, not only in education, but also in economy, culture and so on. As a consequence, it is necessary to have a deep recognition of it in one aspect, and then we can take good advantage of the internet in other fields.
