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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
It is known to all that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. In order to make it successful event, we will improve the environment of Beijing and build more venues。 As the same time,it is necessary for us to improve the quality and culture of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. I notice that sometimes some young people don’t behave properly in our daily lives. For example,spitting in public places can be seen somewhere. The lawns are crossed in the park although it is not right to do so.The flowers in the public garden are picked. What is worse,rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street. In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China. In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions upon visitors to China, which will ruin the good reputation of China as a large country with a long history. So all people should be taught to be well-behaved and every one of us should form good the habits from now on. So every one of us should form the good habits from now on.
