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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(28):战胜失败

发布时间:2014-03-27 17:19浏览次数:801
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根据下面英文提示写一篇短文,词数不少于50。
Success and failure ate common in our life , We win or lose games to others ; we succeed in doing a good job or we fail at times . Every one of us has such kind of experiences from time to time. Give your opinion on failure and success with at least one example.
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

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   The term, friend, covers a wide range of meanings. It can be a nodding acquaintance, a comrade, a partner, a playmate, a brother, etc. As life is full of obstacles and conflicts, we need friends to give us supports to get through tough times, we also need friends to give us warnings to go against danger. True friends share not only joy but, more often than not, they share sorrow and difficulties.   With friendship, life is happy and harmonious. Without friendship, life is hostile and unfortunate. I have friends in the rank and file. Some are rich and in power. Some are low and common. Some are like myself, working as an ordinary teacher, reading and writing and content with the simple life. To many of my friends, I know what to treasure, what to tolerate and what to share, I will never forget my old friends and keep making new friends. I will not be cold and indifferent to the poor friends and will show concern for them, even if it is only a comforting word.

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