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2001年1月英语四级作文真题:如何面试成功

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:40浏览次数:1168
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 面试在求职过程中的作用
2. 取得面试成功的因素
用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

To us,we will graduate in some day,job interview is a important thing.what shall we do succeed in a interview?what factors influnce succeed in job interview? First,we must keep fresh and cool,we should dress up before we go to job interview,make us look cleaning.Dress a formal clothes with deep impression.Let interviewer think you pay attention to this job.When you walk into interview room,you should keep confidece,chining up and cheast out. Next,interviewer will ask you some questions,you should look at his eyes,it's invloved you respect them.when you anser the questions,you should speak mandarin. At length,give interviewer a smile.

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