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Date: June 23rd, 2008 Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Ming and I'm looking forward to being a volunteer for English translator. I want to apply for the position of English translator. I'm a 23 years old young man. Granduating from foreign language college, I have had a good command of English. Being ready to help others, I have a keen interest in public welfare. Thank you for your consideration to my application. Yours sincerely, Li Ming