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假如你是李明，你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。
3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。
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Dear Poul, I quite sympathize with you understand the great trouble you are suffering from in China school. Take it easy,exam is not you all in life.So I have some suggestion with you. First, when you are in trouble or some problem,don"t afforid and edgy,you can tell your classmates or teacher,they giveyour suggestion.Seacond, you don"t always think exam thing,you should think you makeprogress in your hand thatis good for build up confidence,Besides, it is important to have a heathy bady.So you can do excise.This is not noly can make relax youself but also quite fall asleep.I hope my suggestion can help you. Best wishes!
