字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章层次较为清晰。
The picture describes vividly that a bottle of milk spilt on the ground, but two people in the picture have different view to the spilt milk.The left one has a passive view to the spilt milk, because he thinks that the milk had wasted at all. But the right one has an opposite view, he thinks that there is a little of milk in the bottle and he's positive. The same thing,to different people,has different results. The picture tells us a simple but profound truth that we should be positive to every unpleasant thing in life. Because there are many setbacks and unpleasant things in life, if you always are passive to setbacks and you can't understand the nature of setback, you may consider every setback as a hard wall in your way. So we should have a positive attitude to bad things and overcome it, then we can improve us.