2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Now,we are talking about the strong.Everybody needs strong.When we get to the bad things,we lose friends or parents,we are sulvo the sutuation.We all needs strong. First,it is very important to succee,without a strong that everyone can be give up.When we set a goal,than we close to the goal,we will become the winner.So,let it never give up. Second,stronger will be complish the great things.Becaous he or she is stronger. So,we all needs strong,we should do this.If we are not study hard,it is not become the good man.