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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?