2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pays As it describes in the illstrution,Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.The average unemployment rate is 7.6% and the average weekly earnings is $797 in 2011. We can see in the diagram, those who own college degree or even above only in the rate lower then the average.But on the contrast, their earings are all higher than the average $797. From that we can see a problem,high education can make us earn more. Along the advance of the society,the world has been coming into the information time.It means that higher and higher education is requested,intelligent will play a more and more important role in society. So i deem that it is very necessary to receive high education.Achieve a college education not only get high earing but also became more knowlegable.