文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
In the recent year,many students have showed no interests to study chinese.Besides,when many people begin to write,they don't suddenly forget the word or write a wrong word.With the internet culture andfast-food culture fast growing up,our ancient culture and troditional culture are more and more far away us.In our relextion,we do more to see movie ,play game ,shop and so on,but don't to read as a entertainment. Our society is more reality,and socia values more attach skill but ignore culture accomplishment.What's more,it's no use studying chinese. In my opinions,our school and our teacher should correctly guide student to realise the importance of studying chinese and show chinese culture unique charm to students.Chinese check contents should improves the validty of the test .