小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

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Hi,I am Susan.I am 12.I am active gril.I live in GuangZhou.My favourite food is beef.My favoueite class is English class.My favourite teacher is Mr.Wu. He is my English teacher. He is tall and strong.He likes playing football.He is kind and funny.I like he very much.What about you?Who is your favourite teacher?