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I our lives,it is covenit to use disposal bags.The use of disposal bags has been support and spread. But as time goes by.the use of disposal bags more and more,disposal bags doesn't degradation,it has pollute the enviroment.If disposal bags has buried in soil,the soil will be pollute,the poisonous of disposal bags will dissolve inthe water.Then people drinking it that make us get sick.Other hand,when wind blowing,the disposal bags will flight everywhere. so we limiting the use of disposal bags.