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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次较为清晰；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Reading has always been seen as a very complex psychological process. To improve reading ability is not easy. Through teaching practice, coherence and cohesion discovery plays a very important role in reading. This paper attempts to reveal the coherence and cohesion in reading the important role of cohesion proposed to impart knowledge coherent than simply impart knowledge of grammar is more conducive to improve students' reading ability. Core semantic coherent discourse, discourse and semantic coherence of the overall requirements of the various common discourse. Through the language of discourse analysis, the author tries to explain how people construct and understand a variety of coherent discourse, improve reading comprehension, read the article to understand the structure of the framework and the author's intentions and ideas, articles digging deep meaning hidden between the lines and accurate knowledge of the topic of the article. Therefore, the coherent and convergence of basic knowledge related to the introduction of English reading teaching discourse, has some practical significance, can deepen understanding of various linguistic phenomena, strengthen their language skills training. Researchers on the basis of discourse foreign scholars Halliday and Hasan, who researches on the theory of cohesion and coherence are introduced and studied them both consensus, also made a number of different perspectives. Their means of convergence, level, consistent standards and classifications as well as the relationship between cohesion and coherence of proposed additions and different views. This paper aims to vocabulary and grammar cohesion and coherence in discourse studies, analyzes Cohesion and coherence of purpose is to discover the development model of discourse, with the characteristics of the surface structure of discourse and deep structural features descriptions and explanations, Looking Cohesion and coherence of its inherent regularity theory penetrate into foreign language classroom teaching, applied to a wider range of stylistic analysis, using the "word block marked" France in the teaching of reading in English, and in combination with other means of discourse and skills to enable students to gradually get stronger independent reading ability, thereby increasing their ability to use the language. II. Literature review and theoretical 2.1 The concept of cohesion and coherence proposed Semantic whole chapter is achieved by the sentence. Sentences constitute interrelated chapters of both the structure, but also semantically link to each other. The central idea of discourse based on the significance of each paragraph liaison relationships between ideas or to form a coherent whole article is a phenomenon. In the form of text links with the rhetorical idiom articles overall phenomenon is convergence. Cohesion and coherence are two important and different concepts. Coherent semantic content from chapter, and convergence involves structural forms chapter. Simply put, convergence is discourse phenomenon refers to the experience of the speaker to express a coherent and interpersonal aspects of language syntax means; and coherent psychological phenomenon, it exists in the minds of the people, unable to find clues on the discourse level . Coherence and cohesion as a two term first appeared in the discourse linguistics (Text- linguistics or call text linguistics) in. 1950s, Zellig Harris (1952) on Language magazine published an article entitled "Discourse Analysis" (discourse analysis) articles, breaking with the tradition of the sentence is the maximum units of linguistic research methods, the cross-language study included segments scope of the study. 1960s, the rise of the discourse linguistics, both as "discourse analysis (discourse analysis)" language research methods also will rise. 1970s, research in the field of discourse has achieved fruitful results. During the research, mainly in the alleged (reference), indication (dexis), anaphora (anaphora), Context (context), and discussed the topic (topic and comment), external and internal collusion collusion (cohesionand coherence), replace etc. (ZHU Yong-Sheng, 1995), most of which have been regarded as the convergence theory researchers cohesive devices. Thus, a discourse is the interface between linguistics, historical background coherent theory. In addition, pay attention to the relationship between systemic functional linguistics and discourse analysis discourse structure, but also promote the formation and development of the theory of cohesion and coherence to a certain extent.
