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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用学术词汇。

用户练习作文:

Appearance has been viewed as one of the most essential elements when making a statement on someone.One topic under the debate is that whether it is wise or not to judge a person only by his or her appearance. From my point of view,I insist on the opinion that it is unwise for us to come to a conclusion only by what we see on the surface.And the reasons lie in the following two aspects.To begin with,the appearance which includes wearing style,looks and conducting ways can illustrate someone's job,personnality,interests and so on to some extent.However,it is usually inaccurate or not all-rounded as appearance which can be influenced by the mood or weather is changeable all the time.In addition,appearance sometimes gives off the opposite information about the person.For example,many famous people do not like to be recognized as the different one so that they usually dress and perform quite ordinarily instead of showing what we except on them as a star. Overall,to make a precise judgement on someone needs to get well-known information about she or him rather than just from what he or she looks like.Appearance is just a partical factor and observation for a long time is a necessity when making a decision about a person.

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