2006年6月英语四级作文真题:招募志愿者

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Our students organization will organize a activity of volunteer in summer.Now we have to attract some volunteers,for our insufficient of volunteers. Our elements for the summer activity all of these: our purpose:to save the dominates for the pool which people have no enough foods to live and have no clothes enough to get warm. our works:every weekend in July,we have to set a loving case in front of the gate of Archan to save charity.Some of our volunteers absorb the attention of people,such as to transmit the paper which pressed the content of the pool.Some of you sell something to earn the charity. You can call me if you want to join us.The telephone number is 666-888.